
This order of the photographs gives a different argument. A young lady's father served for our country and while doing that he was killed. This young lady knowing that those who serve are like her father allows her to realize that the country is safe and she is able to go have fun, worry free because of those people. This young lady gets married to someone similar to her father to keep the safeness in her life. She usually finds her self looking out her front door, looking at her neighborhood and realizing how thankful she is for those who serve and for her husband who helps her feel safe everyday. - If this story line was placed in a slide show with music to emphasize the life of these people, the argument would be stronger because of the significance that music has on the emotions of others. I also think that this story line could be bettered if the photographs had a text with them that allowed a description of what is going on and background information of a persons life. We recently did an assignment of how knowing at a picture with text can allow us to create a different purpose for them so I think having the text allows for another point of view on what the purpose is.








I thought your did a good job connecting the pictures to the story. I thought it was interesting that in the first image you said that people like to be surrounded by others and in the last picture, even in death, we are still surrounded by others. I don't know why that stuck out to me, but it did. I also though your alternative perspective made sense and connected well.
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave different arguments and sides to your pictures. Music would definitely emphasize more and the text does allow for a better understanding. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI agree music makes a big difference to engage emotion. Without word text, we would not know what you were thinking. Very nice story, I too married a man who also served the country and now have a son in the Army. Military blood runs thick.
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